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Last year around this week one of my friend asked if I would like to join them for Ice skating. I thought for a second and said Yeah! Why not? Frankly I never even tried normal skating but I thought how difficult that can be. There is ice, you were shoes with blades and just skate almost like you walk: P. So one fine Friday afternoon with subzero temperatures we all went a skating arena somewhere near Frolunda. I don't remember the name of that skating arena but I remember we got off at Musikvagen and walked a bit towards that spot. We paid like 50 kroners for renting the shoes and for the skating. I was all excited about the skating and my friends who were a lot experienced in that sport told me that it's not that difficult but just lose your fear of falling down. They said I am going to be the joker of the evening showing my skills in falling on my face: P. We all geared up with those skating shoes and the entire skating track or whatever they call it was looking awesome. There were so many kids doing it so flawlessly that I reassured myself it is simple you will do great. I put my first step on that chilled ice floor and realized how wrong I am. The floor was hell lot sleeper than I had imagined. The fun begins. I was holding on to the fencing and trying to stand upright. All my friends were in the field telling me to let go and I was like "no guys it is freaking bad"J. So two of them came forward took my hands from the fence and started giving me a guided lesson in skating. Here beings my falling spree. The moment they let my hand go suddenly I find myself on the ground and the worst part is getting up without falling down again. I was like a baby learning to walk. But the difference was babies don't care if they fall down I on the other hand was overly cautious. But I guess after a while ( I mean after falling down like 10 times) I got a sense of how to balance myself. I told my friends to let go and tried to finish a round on my own. It was not bad actually. I did fall couple of times again but then I was getting better.
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An Essay On My First Experience With Ice Skating

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              Last year around this week one of my friend asked if I would like to join them for Ice skating. I thought for a second and said Yeah! Why not? Frankly I never even tried normal skating but I thought how difficult that can be. There is ice, you were shoes with blades and just skate almost like you walk: P. So one fine Friday afternoon with subzero temperatures we all went a skating arena somewhere near Frolunda. I don't remember the name of that skating arena but I remember we got off at Musikvagen and walked a bit towards that spot. We paid like 50 kroners for renting the shoes and for the skating.
             
             
              I was all excited about the skating and my friends who were a lot experienced in that sport told me that it's not that difficult but just lose your fear of falling down. They said I am going to be the joker of the evening showing my skills in falling on my face: P. We all geared up with those skating shoes and the entire skating track or whatever they call it was looking awesome. There were so many kids doing it so flawlessly that I reassured myself it is simple you will do great. I put my first step on that chilled ice floor and realized how wrong I am. The floor was hell lot sleeper than I had imagined. The fun begins. I was holding on to the fencing and trying to stand upright. All my friends were in the field telling me to let go and I was like "no guys it is freaking bad"J. So two of them came forward took my hands from the fence and started giving me a guided lesson in skating.
             
              Here beings my falling spree. The moment they let my hand go suddenly I find myself on the ground and the worst part is getting up without falling down again. I was like a baby learning to walk. But the difference was babies don't care if they fall down I on the other hand was overly cautious. But I guess after a while ( I mean after falling down like 10 times) I got a sense of how to balance myself. I told my friends to let go and tried to finish a round on my own. It was not bad actually. I did fall couple of times again but then I was getting better.
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